The Curse of the Fallen Angel - Part 1

"If you kill me, you will regret for it" breathing heavily, Marracia feel that red and hot blood ooze out from her mouth...

"I don't want to, but please come back to us. Lucifer is not the one that you should follow..." Jeremiah beg her while still pointing his silver sword at Marracia.

"Lucifer is who i love now. I will never... never leave him~ NEVER!" Marracia glance at Jeremiah with hatred. Without any doubt, she strike again. Swinging her whip, she use the last strength that she got to attack. Whoosh~ the attack missed. Jeremiah turn and jump behind her, waving his silver sword, it goes deep into Marracia back~

"Arrgghhh" Marracia scream painfully...
"I'm sorry, but you leave me no choice. If you give birth for Lucifer, he will be strong enough to attack us" Pull out his silver sword, Jeremiah feel that his tears has blur up his view...

Marracia is the one and only woman that he likes. And both of them have make their engagement in front of the Almighty God... Its an honor to have Marracia, but his worst nightmare has appeared after Lucifer came between them.

Now, Marracia laying face-down on the green grass. Blood drain out from her body. Jeremiah bend down and carry his love one, kissing her on the forehead and crying out loud... His heart is broken, he doesn't want to kill her. But why? WHY? Is this his fate? For losing Marracia? Wind blew past his face... "I love you, don't you know that?"

Marracia open her eyes weakly and smile to him "Yes, i know you love me, and that's make you a failure" Without any hesitation, she grab Jeremiah silver sword and stab him back... Of coz, Jeremiah's reaction is to throw her away to avoid the stab. By a sudden, the ground shakes tremendously and cracked open... Evil greenish fire rose from the crack, and a good looking guy with pointed ear rose up with it...

"Lucifer" Marracia whisper...
Staring at Jeremiah, Lucifer makes no spare time for him. "I'm going to take Marracia with me, she belongs to me" The greenish fire explode and make a shield between Jeremiah and Lucifer. And within a second, both Lucifer and Marracia vanish in the midst of the greenish fire... The crack on the ground dissapear and everything gone back to the normal...

"No~" Jeremiah shout and crazily striking his silver sword towards the ground... but Marracia and Lucifer were no where to be found...

2 who am I - questions:

  类私理 Lesly

July 19, 2009 at 1:58 AM

Honestly... You should become a script writer...

  Carmi

July 19, 2009 at 5:14 AM

Greetings. You recently left a comment on the blog, Biological Clock Ticking (http://biologicalclockticking.blogspot.com) operated by Anton. You may have noticed that his blog was hastily taken down earlier today. Here's why:

For quite some time, the author of this blog has been copying the work of others and passing it off as his own. This is known as plagiarism. It is not only immoral. It is also an illegal, criminal act.

When confronted about this, Anton chose the coward's way out. Instead of responding, apologizing or otherwise expressing some sort of remorse, he skulked away and started another blog.

I thought you'd want to know this, and would want to verify your own archives to ensure he hasn't used some of your own work as well. I'd recommend checking out the service at http://www.copyscape.com to ensure your own material has not been stolen in a similar manner.

I invite you to contact me via my blog, Written Inc., if you would like to discuss this further.

Thank you.